‘’Funklore’’
by Luke Page
by Luke Page
FADE IN:
EXT.
PARK – MORNING
The sound of falling rain pounds
in the background. Slowly DODE, a monkey with grey fur and purple eyes, appears
high in a tree. Sitting under another tree nearby, silver hair and green eyed young
woman FELICITY is holding herself close silently crying.
A young man, IRURI, black
hair and red eyed, walks past, he stops and conjures an umbrella from his mind,
FELICITY looks up, IRURI blushes, she walks away. IRURI follows her.
IRURI
I was only trying to help
IRURI pulls at her sleeve,
FELICITY, slaps him away.
FLASH
TO WHITE:
INT.
HOUSE – AFTERNOON
A
young FELICITY is creating shapes in the air with her mind, she is smiling with
her family.
FLASH
TO WHITE:
EXT. ALLEYWAY – LATE NIGHT
EXT. ALLEYWAY – LATE NIGHT
A
teenage FELICITY is held at knife point, her mother, ALICIA, goes to hand over
her wallet but mid action lunges at the robber. The blade only draws little
blood as it slides across FELICITY’S throat; it is then thrust into ALICIA’s
heart. ZED, her father, gives chase. FELICITY is left with her mother’s
lifeless body.
FLASH
TO BLACK:
EXT. PARK – MORNING
IRURI’s facial expressions register that he too has seen the vision; he holds his throat as tears start to form. FELICITY goes to hold IRURI.
EXT. PARK – MORNING
IRURI’s facial expressions register that he too has seen the vision; he holds his throat as tears start to form. FELICITY goes to hold IRURI.
IRURI
I had
no Idea
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FLASH
TO WHITE:
INT. HOUSE – AFTERNOON
A
young IRURI is creating shapes in the air with his mind, he is smiling but his
family look on in horror and disgust.
FLASH TO WHITE:
INT. CORRIDOR – EVENING
FLASH TO WHITE:
INT. CORRIDOR – EVENING
A teenage IRURI is playing
in the corridor creating objects from his mind.
INT.
KITCHEN – EVENING
IRURI enters the kitchen
creating a tennis racket, which accidently hits his mother ZYRA while she is
preparing dinner.
ZYRA is infuriated and swinging
around with a knife, lunges towards IRURI, he puts his hands up in confusion
and defense. The knife slices into his hands; she then kicks him away and holds
her head.
ZYRA
UGH! I’m so sick of your
shit!
IRURI creates a skateboard
on which she slips and falls. IRURI runs before she has time to recover.
FLASH
TO BLACK:
EXT.
PARK – MORNING
FELICITY
and IRURI are still holding each other, crying in the rain. DODE watches on
quietly.
A yellow
eyed SLOTH crawls out of the fountain behind them.
MONTAGE:
EXT.
PARK – MORNING TO EVENING
A fast sped-up montage of the rain getting heavier, the sun zooming across the sky and finally the moon taking its place; reveals the two falling asleep on the other side of the tree FELICITY was initially crying under. Meanwhile, the SLOTH, which originally appeared normal sized, has now become huge and towers over them.
A fast sped-up montage of the rain getting heavier, the sun zooming across the sky and finally the moon taking its place; reveals the two falling asleep on the other side of the tree FELICITY was initially crying under. Meanwhile, the SLOTH, which originally appeared normal sized, has now become huge and towers over them.
EXT. PARK – EVENING
The
couple awakens to the sight of the SLOTH swinging its claw at them. They both
cringe. DODE leaps in front of the SLOTH's swing and gets knocked away from the
fight, unconscious.
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IRURI
I got this
I got this
IRURI
charges at the SLOTH. FELICITY on the other hand, faces it and closes her eyes as
she lifts her hand and slowly conjures a van (balancing on its rear bumper)
with her mind. IRURI runs towards the giant SLOTH, wielding his umbrella in his
right hand and using his left to create steps he proceeds to climb. IRURI jumps
on the SLOTH's shoulders; he hits it on the head 3 times, turning the umbrella
into a baseball bat and a sledge hammer for the final blow. Satisfied IRURI
jumps off SLOTH, which now looks dizzy and in pain.
FELICITY
Ah
funggit (funk it)!
FELICITY
finishes the SLOTH off by giving the van a light push, squishing it right down,
fan dangled. FELICITY and IRURI look at each other and smile. IRURI looks at
DODE, who is still unconscious. FELICITY, standing the closest to him, picks
him up and cradles him.
FELICITY
Thank
you mister Dode
IRURI
Is
that his name? Groovy I like it! Hey Dode (pokes DODE’s cheek)
IRURI
(cont’d)
I’m
Iruri by the way
FELICITY
Felicity,
it was really nice meeting you
IRURI
You
too
IRURI
throws his arm over FELICITY’s shoulder and makes an umbrella large enough to
shield the three of them from the rain. DODE opens his eyes, gazes at the
couple then closes them again.
ENDING CREDITS –
The
ending credits are a slow fade to black featuring the three protagonists
walking into the distance in a looping animation.
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'Funklore'
By Luke Page
A good start and some good ideas coming through. Pull this through to a step outline so you get an idea of how long this will be and good to see you are thinking about your story visually as this is very important. Good work.
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